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学写七排[新韵] 嵌名赠诗友1/2/09

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学写七排嵌名赠各诗友（原创）

分赠华山论剑/东门听雪/寒泉/碧海花影/风帆/凌寒/乐天雅士/七星等友，初学七排，疏漏处请诗友们斧正，诚谢。

蝶羽纷纷舞华山，披蓑戴笠觅芳颜。

推门已晓茅屋暖，迈步方知四野严。

听雪荒郊心情畅，赏竹小径神色欢。

溪泉绕绕无筌网，碧海遥遥有风帆。

危岭蹒跚寻梅迹，巅峰伫立望飞帘。

崖边难见凌寒影，石上偶得雅士篇。

徐下银阶独吟哦，且邀皓首共一谈。

隆中自古多才俊，岱岳向来有隐贤。

酒罢挥毫描北斗，兴来泼墨赋河川。

西风不解此中意，依旧空吹复向南。

2009/1/2写于宛城。

经七星先生指点，改几字。

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